2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者词汇量积累不错，一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活，有个别拼写错误；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

A Beautiful City In China I have been lived 20 years in Taiyuan since I wad born.It's a beautiful city in my heart.There are orderly matri of streets,clear Fen river,and long history. The streets divide Taiyuan to several portions,they looks like manyretangle.The Fen River located the middle part in Taiyuan,It is arounded a lot of trees,they consist a beautiful picture. Taiyuan has unique culcture,thay are Fen Wine and muture vinegar.The Fen Wine not only smell mellow,but also taste delicious.The muture vinegar smell sour,but it's a healty food in our life.It made from cereal,it's a good condiment for our meal.Vinegar can make our skin fair and slick. Beautiful Taiyuan has other many interesting characteristics.Dou you want to visit it?