2008年6月英语六级作文真题:电子图书

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章词汇表达丰富，不过请增加高级词汇的使用；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I knew how much pleasure you took in your family.I had been and must ever been grateful for the appreciation of Jack. I even felt choked when I heard about his accidential death. As my mom stood there blaming for my mistakes and flaws. He pleaded his faults for me. I aspire to plead for the women's right. I could have lived a restful life, instead I choose a hardworking life. Gritting my teeth, I headed for looking for him. I got up eariler, brushed my teeth, polished my shoes, making up myself and went for the interview.