2008年6月英语六级作文真题:电子图书

从句数量偏少；文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨。

I knew how much pleasure you took in your family.I had been and must ever be grateful for the appreciation of Jack. I even felt choked when I heard about his accidental death. My mom stood there blaming for my mistakes. He pleaded his failure for his family. I aspire to plead for the women's right. I could have lived a restful life, but I choose a hardworking life. Gritting my teeth, I headed for looking for him. I got up earlier, brushed my teeth, polished my shoes, making up myself and went for the interview.