Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式多变,多多练习从句的使用;文中高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写需要再认真些。
more and more youny people like use to computer communication,but some people support it,they think computer development is very speeding,but other people againts it.they think it is make people have pruduce distance. in my opioin,computer development have good and bad ,frist of all,with the life level improve,computer become people life necessary,but the internet have a lot of function,young people is easily indulge in virtual word.secondly,computer is not good for people chat about they real idea.