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Of all the phenomenon that have existed during a person's life, perhaps the most debatable one is confronting such a amazing giraffe, which should be with a face of human being. Abruptly, an adventruous thought comes into her mind, she wants to catch it up, keeping it as a pet to play with herself. In a flash, the giraffe has disppeared just in front of her. Nevertheless, it should turn up the moment she just blinks. "Don't be afraid of me, let me have a simple self-introduction, I am the god of giraffes." Jasmine distaines right a fancy animal, ridiculing what he said. "Hey, man, without those silly words, I might have regarded you as a lovely giraffe, but that you should say human's language discloses that you is merely a man, disduishing a giraffe. I am not a little girl, I won't believe in you." "Curiousity offers many advantages, first and foremost of which is to spark the enthusiasm exploring the unknown world, I admire your courage and curiousity. However, I am, as a matter of fact, a real immortal, next, I will show my superior ability to you. For instance, I can understand the deepest thought of everyone's heart. I know you want to catch me up, making me you pet, just now. Am I right?" To be honest, what the giraffe has said does being convincing. Now that a real god just stands in front of her, it is a little girl's perception that it should go fortunate as the character in a fairy tale, the immortal can make her dream come true in a right away, she begs religiously, " I exactly trust in you at the first time I saw you, the great immotal, please help me and change my life, I am keeping in trouble, my parents always leave me alone because of their heavy business, although I still have a kind grandmother who take me as her treasure, but it is easy to feel lonely without an accompany to tell a word. So, please approve my insignificant requirement." The giraffe smiles and answer her in sympathy, "My kid, I really want to help you, however, you should comprehend that there is always a irresitible process that we must experience and learn from in the course of everyone's life. Many peole tend to live under a illusion that they shoud live a ideal life far away from various sufferings. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the fact that the suffering is the most important aspect of life. Although the present time is too lonely to tolerate, you can still make the best use of the quiet days, burying all your attention to reading, writing and studying to improve yourself. Admittedly, being alone can't be accepeted by overwhelming majority of people. Nevertheless, devotion to the job that can enhance your own ability and broaden your horizon, being in such a quiet situation, can also be a great benefit to you. Accordingly, due attention should be paid to working hard without disturbing. Only by working hard without external disturbance, can eable one to be well prepared to change her life. And it is also through this way that one can accumulate adequate ability to confront much more challenges and there is no other way, so, good luck to you." Haven't wait to reply a word to him, the giraffe disappears as if he hasn't never turn up there.Then, the light from those giraffes fades and the giraffes also disappear without a second. Finally, Jasmine has found she has been juggled by that "immortal." With the rage growing increasingly insurmountable, she wakes up and realize what has taken place is just a ridiculous dream.
