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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40866
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分52.0分
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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中有几处拼写错误,应增加高级词汇的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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We watch things through our eyes and listen the sound by our ears every day and every second.However what we see and what we listen are not usually the truth.The world is full of the lies.If you can recognise the truth, you are a surperman. As we all known, there is no body who is right all the time.For exmple ,some people who have color blind consider red is green.So how can you believe what you watch are realistic.What's more ,when you hear the story form others , how could you tell whether waht others talk aboult is realistic?So when when we are going to get a conclusion, we should think it more than one time.What the things?How did it happen?When did it happen?Is it reasonable?If you think about them and have the answer ,you could get the right answer. In conclusion,consider the things that you hear and see.don't be cheated by the surface.

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