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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3523
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Whether when we are older should or should not be learned is a much debated problem in that it affects everybody in their daily lives.Careful conderation leads me to believe that we should learn even if we are older. First of all, as the west saying goes,never too old to learn,so I believe that everyone shouldn't stop learning .Only we keep learning ,can we know the devolpment of society.A small example could give some light to this point. It is said that Mr.Alex is never learn when he was 89 ,so he don't know everything around him.Obviously, keeping learning is very important for us. Secondly, I believe that keeping learning can help us to make great progress to become a better person.Sometimes, for example, I am very terrible.Not only have a bad grade ,but also have a bad attitude for life.But suddenly, I want to change because I don't like me. I become harder and harder and spent full time to learn.Fortunatily, I am better. Last but not least,keeping learning is a well attitude for life. We all ought to own this attitude for life.As we know,never too old to learn. In conclusion, it is my opinion that we should keep learning regardless of our age.

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