2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

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The Disadvantage Of Advertise Advertising which can be seen everywhere in daily life. For example, we can see a.d. from TV, Internet, street, ever people who give out leafets and so on. Which influence what people think, more worse, having negative effects. To generally speaking, people only can see advantages from the advertise. Most of time, they will be seduced into the advertise, buy something they do not really need. In my opinion, on the one hand, some company in order to conduct a product, they cost a lot of money to employ a famous star. Misleading people think the product is a good thing, so that they buy it. On the other hand, I think through advertised a product channels, which can raise the price of the product. It's we spend more money to buy a cheaper thing. This is an effect in our life. particularly, when there is a famous star to endorse, many people will think it's a resonable price. Finally, due to group psychology, people always go with the flow, buying some do not suit them. In conculsion, I think the best product do not need advertised, and we should buy the best thing that appropriate for ourselves.