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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇使用灵活，也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用。
Actually, I am very appreciated with my college years, I have learned a lot of abilities from my school life, such as, independent, confidence and insist on somethings. I consider all of these will support me into society easily. In fact, I have stayed with my family almost eighteen years before I going to university. So I was not very independent when I leaved my hometown to guangdong. Besides, it is a long ditance to go home. It is really hard for me to stay a completely strange place, but, at the same time, I am very luck to go through these things. Because I learned how to slove some problems by myself, which will help me a lot in my work. Apart from that, I did some part-time jobs during the university's time, which not only make me earn some money to relieve the preasure of my parents, but also I learn how to communicate with the other people well. Thus, I got more confidance in my future life. In the last, learning teached me an important point that we should insist on the study through our willpower. There is a kind of freedom of learning way in university, so you need to spend more time in stydying by yourself. Therefore, possessing the willpower is significance. All in all, don't lose faith, as long as unremittingly, you will get the fruits in the future life.
