2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；可适当增加文中高级词汇的使用，注意文中个别拼写错误；结构较为严谨，文中衔接成分很少。

A dusty and bloody boy five-year-old Sriyan boy captured the attantion of people around the world in this week. The boy suffered head injuries when his family's apartment building in the city of Aleppo was hit by a bomb. The boy was rescued from the rubble of the building. His family members were also rescued. None of them had serious injuries. The video and photos show the boy being lifted into an ambulance by a rescue worker. People can be heard yelling in the background. The boy, who has been identified as Omran Dagneesh, remains quiet and calm.