语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。
A Beautiful City In China If my friend is going to visit my hometown and i will take him to beijing,actually,although china is so big and i never think other city can represent china except beijing,beijing is a symbolize of chinese people. Beijing is capital of china which has the deepest historic inside information,there is a large number of cultural relics like The great wall,The forbbiden City and more which result in that many tourist from all world are attracted to there.Meanwhile,there are many delicious but cheap snack like beijing roasted duck,bingtanghulu and many other which bring about that you indulge in pleasures without stop. In a word,beijing is a unique city in china. i believe my friend is very luck cause he has a friend of understanding chinese envoriment and i will take him appreciate beautiful rivers and monntains of the country!