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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71617
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用高级词汇。

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A Beautiful City In China If my friend is going to visit my hometown and I will take him to Beijing, actually, although China is so big and I never think other cities can represent China except Beijing, Beijing is a symbolize of Chinese people. Beijing is the capital of China which has the deepest historic inside information, there are a large number of cultural relics like the great wall, the Forbidden City and more which result in that many tourist from all world are attracted to there. Meanwhile, there are so many delicious but cheap snacks like beijing roasted duck, bingtanghulu and other which bring about that you indulge in pleasures without stop. In a word, Beijing is a unique city in China. I believe my friend is very luck cause he has a friend of understanding Chinese environment and I will take him appreciated beautiful rivers and mountains of the country!

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