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A Beautiful City In China If my friend is going to visit my hometown and I will take him to Beijing, actually, although China is so big and I never think other cities can represent China except Beijing, Beijing is a symbolize of Chinese people. Beijing is the capital of China which has the deepest historic inside information, there are a large number of cultural relics like the great wall, the Forbidden City and more which result in that many tourist from all world are attracted to there. Meanwhile, there are so many delicious but cheap snacks like Beijing roasted duck, Crispy Sugar-Coated Fruit on a Stick and other which bring about that you indulge in pleasures without stopping. In a word, Beijing is a unique city in China. I believe my friend is very luck cause he has a friend of understanding Chinese environment and I will take him appreciated beautiful rivers and mountains of the country!
