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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似，简历一般包括个人情况，教育背景，个人能力，目标职业等信息。在写简历时，一定要实事求是，不可夸大其词，要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外，还要注意简历的格式和语言，格式要整齐明了，语言要简洁有力。
文中学术词汇不足；文章层次较为清晰；可适当增加从句使用，注意极个别句子错误；请注意分段。
Hello,everyone.My name is Liyuwei from Shandong province.Once my best friend has told me a phrase which become my motto I'll never say never.Sorry to say that I'm an ordinary girl who don't have perfect experience before.Growing up in a little unknown city,I lived a peace and quiet even you can say dull and repeat life.But now,I'm here,wanting to get a chance to join your big family.The reasons you must admit me into your organisation are as follows.Firstly,maybe you have ever seen a movie called The Pursuit of Happyness.It tells a story about a man achive his dream by learning from the beginning even he was in a poor situation.In my opinion,everying has a beginning.Today,if you give me a chance,another I'll prove myself to you.
