词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少;全文结构较为严谨。
There is a proverb which going"don't put all of your eggs in one basket."Which is very wise action.And we may see that,many owners of enterprises don't like to put all of their companies in one country in case of the risks.With the development of technology,I think we have to think about this.