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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3523
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

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用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

An apt rewording of the statement could be that people are never too old to learn. Learning is definitely a lifelong process. In my view,we should keep learning regardless of our age,for three reasons addressed below. First of all, as the saying goes,never too old to learn,so I believe that everyone shouldn't stop learning in any situation. Only we keep learning,can we know the development of society. A small case can give some light to this point. Alex would never learn when he 89,so he didn't know everything around him. Obviously,keeping learning is very important for us.Secondly, I think that keeping learning can help us to make great progress to become a better person. Sometimes,for example, I am a poor man. Not only I don’t have a great grade,but also I am negative attitude towards life. But suddenly,I want to change because I don't like this way of life.I become more and more efforts and spend full time in learning to broaden horizons and improve yourself. Fortunately,I made it and I become better and better. So,I proved that keeping learning really can help us to make great progress to become a better person. Last but not least,keeping learning is a good attitude towards life. Only a positive attitude towards life,can we have a better life. In conclusion,according to the above mentioned reasons,I believe that we should keep learning regardless of our age because learning is definitely a lifelong process.

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