小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My Friend Hell,everyone.My name is Amy.l like to make friends with people.Lu Zhu is my good friend. She is short and thin.Her eyes are small but her mouth is big. She is a middle school student.She is a good student. She is good at English. She likes speaking in English... She likes watching TV and playing the basketball. We are really good friend.