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从句数量稍显不足，注意增加从句和复杂句的使用；词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持，也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇；文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词，建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Friendship Sometimes I always think what is real friendship. I have got some ideas from some events that have happened in the latest days.The real friendship is respect,equality,inclusiveness,and understanding between friends. Due to my coldness and independence,I have a few of closed friends.In my opinion,equality is the basic principle if you want to make friends with others.Why we need friends?One of these resons is to promote two persons' devolopment.Even I had dedicated to make friends with somebody,but failed.That's because I ever naglected the importance of common interests.Having common interests will impact how long their friendship can endure.More importantly, never believe that your endless indusiveness can endure your friendship.Frankly speaking,you must lose your heart in some day because it's uneaqual as it started. Together is not scattered.
