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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但高级词汇稍显不足;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。
The Mid-Autumn Festivals is one of the most traditional Chinese festivals, it starts from the ancient time and nowadays people still celebrate it as the moment to reunion the family. According to the Chinese lunar calendar the Mid-Autumn festival falls on the mid of August when the moon's shape is become more around. Most of Chinese family likes to eat moon cake or sending the moon cake with greeting as gift to friends. People like to make a travel plan or visiting friends when mid-autumn festival has been lawfully set as a public holiday.