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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
The Mid-Autumn Festivals is one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it starts from the ancient time and nowadays people still celebrate it as the moment to reunion the family. Usually people back to home no matter how far the place their work is, or how busy the work they doing. According to the Chinese lunar calendar the Mid-Autumn festival falls on the mid of August when the moon is completely revealed. Most of Chinese family likes to eat moon cake or sending the moon cake with greeting as gift to friends. People like to make a travel plan or visiting friends when mid-autumn festival has been lawfully set as a public holiday.