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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。
The Mid-Autumn Festivals is one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it starts from the ancient time and nowadays people still celebrate it as the moment to reunion the family. Usually people back to home no matter how far the place their work is, or how busy the work they doing. According to the Chinese lunar calendar the Mid-Autumn festival falls on the mid of August when the moon is completely revealed. Most of Chinese family likes to eat moon cake or sending the moon cake with greeting as gift to friends. The difference between modern time and old time is, some people like to make a travel plan or visiting friends when mid-autumn festival has been lawfully set as a public holiday, instead of dinning home with families and enjoy the landscape.