2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

部分长句用的不错，但从句比例偏少；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Wil First, it is important for succeed to a strong will. A success road with many difficult things, and only people who have a strong will can pass it. Besides, man who have a strong will can finish big mission.Back from history,we find a truth, many famourers have a strong will, and their success without strong will.As Mao Zedong and many alders, if not a strong will, the new China can't be build. Also students, have a strong will, can't be afarid for difficult in study and get succeed. If students don't study hard, their can't become useful man. So, everyone should be have a strong will to get succeed.