语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇积累还有很大进步空间。
In this days, many people treat certificate craze as the way to get a job, they always put themselves to varies exam. Certificate craze is good to get a job, but in my opinion the more significant thing is your ability to solve a problem, on the other hand, it may make people lose the meaning of learning, make attainment senseless.