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We have 25 person altogether will take part in, included 12 boys 11girls and two teacher. We will go to the famous Harrow school and study there four weeks. Of course we have planed some tracel activties for relax. Then I want to tell you something about our plan. We manage to have English Classes in the morning when I have the must energy and concentration in on day.In the afternoon we are going to vist great London or join some sport activies. In weekend we want to travel other cities by train. AS for accomodation,we would like to have a host family living in English family is helpful for us to improve our speeking competence.
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