语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;高级词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒。
In this days, many people treat certificate craze as the way to get a job, they always put themselves to varies exam. Certificate craze is good to get a job, but in my opinion the more significant thing is your ability to solve a problem, on the other hand, it may make people lose the meaning of learning, make attainment senseless. And some people even discipline because of certificate craze, they view the certificate craze as their future.