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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3100
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

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In this days, many people treat certificate craze as the way to get a job, they always put themselves to varies exam. Certificate craze is good to get a job, but in my opinion the more significant thing is your ability to solve a problem, on the other hand, it may make people lose the meaning of learning, make attainment senseless. And some people even discipline because of certificate craze, they view the certificate craze as their future, then they hire people to particepant the exam for them, that make the one who really need the opportunity to get the certificate craze fail. General speaking , I don't think too much certificate is good and we really should care is that we should improve our abilitie on every side.

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