语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文章词汇表达灵活恰当,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
In this age, many people treat certificate as the way to get a job, they always put themselves to various exams. Certificate craze is good to get a job, but in my opinion the more significant thing is your ability to solve a problem, on the other hand, it may make people lose the meaning of learning, make attainment senseless. And some people even discipline because of certificate craze, they view the certificate craze as their future, then they hire people to particepant the exam for them, that make the one who really need the opportunity to get the certificate craze fail.