2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

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July，13,2012，when I gone shop with my friend. When I was talking about with my friend，I seen a car was gone straght very fast. At that time，I was worry to the car that would shock to the people. When this mean in my heart，the unlucky thing was happen.The car shock to the student，at that ，she was playing her callphone and she didn't know what happen for her！Because she didn't look the road！ I think，the host of the car，he have driver too fast to hurt somebaby，but，the student isn't right，she should't to play cellphone on the road! This is my seeing,and my thinking.I hope to that could help you !