文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基础较为扎实。
In this age, many people treat the certificate as the way to get a job, so they always put themselves to various exams. Certificate craze is good to get a job, but in my opinion the more significant thing is your ability to solve a problem, on the other hand, it may make people lose the meaning of learning, make attainment senseless. And some people even discipline because of certificate craze, they look on certificate as their future, then they hire people to take part in exam for them, that make the one who really need the opportunity to get the certificate craze fail.