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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9027
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中衔接词丰富;文中词汇表达灵活多样,高级词汇的使用还需加强;文中从句使用不丰富。

用户练习作文:

Recently,study in internet has been widely useed by more and more people. there exist several phenomenon. fist, many childen are willing to learn in interest than in school. second,their parents began to think if their childen need to school or to been touch. the last but the most terrible, people even think school doesn't need to been built. However, i totally don't agree the view above. in my opinon, the school cann't been replaced. stating as follows: 1. the childen would be weak in conversation

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