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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中衔接词丰富；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文章词汇表达丰富，若多用高级词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了。
Recently，study in the internet has been widely useed by more and more people. there exist several phenomenon. Fist, many childen are willing to learn in interest than in school. Second,their parents began to think if their children need to school or to be touch. The last but the most terrible, people even think school doesn't need to be built. However,I totally don't agree the view above. in my opinion, the school cann't been replaced. stating as follows: 1. the childen would be weak in conversation
