Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
从句数量偏少;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;文中衔接词丰富。
Recently,study on the internet has been widely used by more and more people. There exist several phenomena . Fist, many children are willing to learn in interest than in school. Second, their parents began to think if their children need to school or to be touch. The last but the most awful, people even think school doesn't need to be built. However, I totally don't agree the view above. In my opinion, the school can't be replaced.Stating as follows: 1. the children would be weak in conversation