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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9027
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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从句数量偏少;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;文章层次较为清晰。

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Recently,study on the internet has been widely used by more and more people. There exist several phenomena . Fist, many children are willing to learn in interest than in school. Second, their parents began to think if their children need to school or to be taught. The last but the most awful, people even think school doesn't need to be built. However, I totally don't agree the view above. In my opinion, the school can't be replaced.Stating as follows: 1. the children would be weak in conversation. Communicating is the brige for person to person. I can't image how the human will be

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