错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Are Dialects Just as Accpetable in Public Places? Nowadys, with the develoment of economic, more and more people form all directions gather in a city,we can see foreigners and strangers easily. It must be promoted interculture communication. Sure, there is a problem that someone use dialects in public places. Do you think it is acceptable? In my opinion, we should avoid to use our hometown language in public places. Here are my reasons. First of all, when there are someone who can not understand your dialects, while you speak your hometown language in front of them. It's impolite. You should not ignore their feeling. They must feel boring, even anger. Then, due to we are come from different country that have different custom. For example, when someone do something, you feel that's fanny, so you smile to your company with your dialects. At the same time, the man who does not understand your langue might think you are laughing him off. In coclusion, I don't appeal that we should abandon our hometown language, because it's a precious culture. But we had better respect someone who don't know your own language, and avoid to speak dialects. Sure, I swear you don't want to someone talking in front you and using the language you don't understand.