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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9027[网页划词已开启]
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量;词汇表达灵活丰富请继续保持,也能较好的使用一定的高级词汇。

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Although to break bad habits is harder than develop them,we should try our best to cast aside these bad habits. there are several common bad habits in our daily school life,such as play computer game without control,play mobilphone every second and stay up all night.What can we get from them?Just a short moment of pleasure,in fact,and indulging in them which is a lose of fighting spirit for life. Before breaking these bda habits,we should make it clear that what we really want,and who we want to be.These are power that can drive us to make a change.It is not a easy course ti break bad habits,so we should always encourage ourself to do something more meaningful ,such as partiicipate in science and technology lecture,do some sports and so on. When getting rid of bad habits,can we live a efficient and health life.

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