过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;文章用词太过单一,注意少数拼写错误。
at first i think this opinion is right. first of all we can not judge angthing just by our eye or ear. because sometimes what we see and hear is not right. if we draw a conclusion quickly,so we will make a foult. next,we should thinking carefully after we see or hear something so that we can draw a right conclusion.in my opinion, if we want draw a right conclusion ,we must test it by ourselous. only by this ,we can sure we are right.so i think this opinion is right.
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