小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中从句过少；全文结构较为严谨；词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误。

I have a good friend. Her name is jerry. she is sixteen. We are classmates and we all like playing footboll. We always gether to play on the ground after out of school, then we will do homework tagether. On sundays we will have a talk, told each other what happen, sometimes we need other's advices.