从句使用不熟练;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇;全文结构较为严谨。
I have a good friend. Her name is jerry. She is sixteen. We are classmates and we all like playing football. We always gether to play on the ground after out of school, then we will do homework tagether. On sundays we will have a talk, told each other what happening, sometimes we need other's advice.