小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达不够丰富，高级词汇方面要多累积；全文结构较为严谨。

I have a good friend. Her name is jerry. She is sixteen. We are classmates and we all like playing football. We always gether to play on the ground after school, then we will do homework tegether. On Sundays we will have a talk, told each other what happening, sometimes we need other's advice.