文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
Grace is my best friend that is best matter in my life. She is a pretty girl and very nice! When i was discouraged ,she always smiling and then told me ,you are the best one! She has a lot of hobbies,such as reading,play the piano and dancing. She's always helpful and complaisant, our classmates like her very much.