2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

作者词汇使用熟练灵活，但要注意避免拼写错误；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

nowadays, most companies invest a large part of money on advertising, in order to make their business more familiar to customers. At the same time, it is an important methods to compete with peers. As customers, they can know which is better throug advertising comparation. At the same time, some public service advertising are also preaded widely. According to this, advertising play an important role in our daily life. however, each coin has two sides. some immoral businessmen insert violent or pornographic content in advertising. These kind of advertising spread bad information especially for little kids. The immoral advertising will misguide children and have bad influence on their healthy growth. For example, violent advertising might lead children to commit a crime. It will bring the social invironment many unstable factors. Anyway, in my opinion, the good influence surpass the bad ones. As long as, we treat ads strictlly and set up legal. I belive ads would make daily life more colorful