小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

i have a good friend whose name is yoyo. She always likes to help others. She has a good-heart. She can make delicious foods and share them with us. She is also open-minded and optimistic. i like to make friend with her, because she can teach me something else i don't know. She always tells me to save money and do not waste food or money. That s right. And she helps me to correct my mistakens. It's very useful. By the way, she is a good mother. She takes care of her son very well. We have the same interesting, that's to make tea every morning. Although we get to know each other for a short time, but we became a good friend soon. I hope that our friendship lasts forever.