小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend whose name is YoYo. She always likes to help others. She has a good-heart. She can make delicious foods and share them with us. She is also open-minded and hopeful. I like to make friend with her, because she can teach me something else i don't know. She always tells me to save money. That's right. And she helps me to correct mistaken. It's very useful. By the way, she is a good mother. She takes care of her son very well. We have the same interest, it's to make tea every morning. Although we got to know each other for a short time, we became a good friend soon. I hope that our friendship lasts forever.