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2007年专八英语作文真题:经济差距影响友谊

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:14浏览次数:4223
要求:
题目 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship.
说明 Some people think that financial disparity affects friendship. What do you think?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇。

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As for some people, financial disparity is a key criteria that influences their friendship with their friends. In my opinion, financial disparity undoubtedly make a difference in how the friends get along with each other. The influence of financial disparity manifests itself in many aspects. Firstly, when there is an inequality between the wealth of two persons, there will be unavoidable differences in their ways of living, which may correspondingly contribute to the formation of different views on value and the world. Therefore conflicts may occur when one person looks at a problem from an opposite direction from which the other one looks at the problem.

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