语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;作者词汇表达恰当,同时能较灵活地使用高级词汇。
As for some people, financial disparity is a key criteria that influences their friendship with their friends. In my opinion, financial disparity undoubtedly make a difference in how the friends get along with each other. The influence of financial disparity manifests itself in many aspects. Firstly, when there is an inequality between the wealth of two persons, there will be unavoidable differences in their ways of living, which may correspondingly contribute to the formation of different views on value and the world. Therefore conflicts may occur when one person looks at a problem from an opposite direction from which the other one looks at the problem.