邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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About campus security,I have some suggestions. By campus violence against the students,we should stop the violence in the school, the police or the help of parents, and must not be submissive or violence with violence.Specific practices are as follows,On the way to school or school, the students had better go hand in hand with each other and help each other.