广东汕头市2013届高三上学期期末试卷英语作文

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A coach of psychology,Kelly Lam delevered a speech on the view of sharing among Chinese students last weekend. Over 30% of the students are unwilling to share with others,in spite of someone who is happy or not.In addition,the system of our education didn't attach the importance of sharing to the kids. From experts' perspective,they think it's indispansable for us to learn how to share our feelings,especially in this hood.What's more,they also believe that sharing feelings is of benefic to our further growing.