作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法基本功不错,可适当增加从句的使用。
Are dialects just as acceptable as mandarin in public places? Some people say no, because it makes people from other city or province puzzled. Some say yes, because they are also language, which means people can use them in public. I agree with the later view: dialects should be regarded as acceptable in public places. People born in different places and at different education level should be treated equally everywhere in this country, including public places. There are three reasons. First, people speak dialects have the right to speak freely and have the right to choose weather to use dialects or mandarin.,Even though dialects might cause confusion for somebody in public. Secondary, low educated people seldom know how to speak mandarin but dialects, but they are just the group need to speak more and make the society pay attention to their appeals. The last but not the least, dialects can make people from the same town feel much warmer and eager to share their feelings. third, Dialects could be considered as a local culture which need to be used and spread so that it can be inherited. In conclusion, no matter which language one speak, mandarin or English, French or Arabic, he/she can speak freely and be considered as acceptable in public, let alone dialects.