字数:200满分:100分
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文章词汇表达灵活恰当,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;句法知识掌握不错,但文中从句数量偏少。
from the picture we can see two men both of whom have only leg walk toward forward fastly with cooperation. So the drawing want to express that sometimes cooperation is better than oneself alone. nowadays, teamwork is much more important than ever, especially in business. for instance, each company have different departments just because of this.