字数:200满分:100分
文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章词汇表达丰富,若多用高级词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了。
from the picture we can see two men both of whom have only one leg walk toward forward fastly with cooperation. So the drawing want to express that sometimes cooperation is better than oneself alone. nowadays, teamwork is much more important than ever, especially in business. cooperation is not just only work with others but also need to know their characterate. whether they have some special things that don't want others touch.