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Nanjing is the capital city in Jiangshu province where is locating in the east-south of china. it has around 500 million people live in this city. Nanjing's history has over 2400 hundred years, there were 10 dynasty has been established here. you can take a trip to view those modern building and factories, meanwhile, don't forget that Nanjing has so many popular traveling place such as Jingming temper, stone city, Xuanwu lake. enjoy your trip
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